there was a placid elegance
to the manner in which
she draped her aged,
delicate, long fingers – still and calm –
upon, the trouser folds arrayed
atop her knee
and crackled a soft chuckle,
and replied
the words, “in theory”
the words, “in theory”
when I asked, if things were going better –
for she’d had a bout of misery:
bad luck, bad health as bad . . .
about as tough as hard, hard days of living
– dismally – can be:
for old ladies – alone and poor.
“It’s all good”, she smiled: bright,
kind – warmly, tenderly . . .
as she struggled to her feet
and took her cane
– her bowed back, an arc:
a hunched, stooped arc,
of mean, relentless weary pain –
and gushed: “Just wonderful ! ! !
to come . . . upon you, once again.”
photo: Old Building:
Hanging In, Cheerily - W. Bourke
©
2014 Wendy Bourke
hopefully that little connection made it all right...
ReplyDeletei have a feeling she is fooling only herself
and if so i hope that one day she sees that...
and lives beyond it...
Well, I think at least she tries to maintain a spirit of optimism. I really cannot fault her for that. It is better than the alternative, I think!
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian and Mary. I think that spirit of optimism is the quality that makes her a beautiful woman. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteAnd, yes - optimism. But, also - DIGNITY - exiting (with age and illness and on and on) with DIGNITY. I think (through out life - until the end, if one can hold onto at least a bit of dignity and, perhaps a wee bit of humor) that is a good way to leave the stage.)
DeleteWow Wendy ...she does carry herself elegantly....I like her self-esteem and positive attitude..an inspiring profile...
ReplyDeleteAnd also, self-esteem and positive attitude. Thanks, Sumana.
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Deletefor she’d had a bout of misery: - This is very moving and quite heart breaking. Makes you think of value and hope, within pain.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alan. Lovely comment.
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ReplyDeleteThis is packed full of imagery, such a beautiful depiction.
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So vivid... I feel for her...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your thoughtful comments, Lauren and Laurie.
ReplyDeleteI like all the details in this, such as the trouser folds. I feel like I'm there. Yes, I'd call her a beautiful woman.
ReplyDeleteI've met her . . . many times . . . over many, many years. Thanks, Janet.
ReplyDeleteMy mother was one of those "beautiful women". I hope I can be so beautiful then.
ReplyDeleteThey are dear.
ReplyDeleteThere is beauty in such strength. Lovely telling Wendy.
ReplyDeleteHaving to connect is a good thing. At least there is an effort little it might be. It may work wonders later on! Nicely Wendy!
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Yes I have seen this so many times. how, despite pains, there is always a cheerful smile.. and maybe it is in a relative manner... I hope you shone the light into her day so she could go on and not settle into misery,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Jennifer, Hank and Bjorn!
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