Thursday 10 April 2014

between dusk and dark


I had – outwalked, the amiable light – 
and arrived at that moody phantasmal place 
between dusk and dark

when the canyon walls of the city  
morph – at the coming, of the night – 
to black, cold onyx mirrored reflections

and it came to me:  I had wandered  
into a thousand déjà vus, as my footsteps fell 
in haunting echoes –  and white . . . ghostly shivers. 

note:  Black onyx is believed to release negative emotions such as sorrow and grief and sharpen your senses.  Black stones have protective energies in that:  black is the absence of light and can be used to create invisibility.

photo:  The Vancouver Art Gallery on Hornby St.  This elegant neoclassical building, has been used in more than 100 TV and movie productions, including Night at the Museum.  With its columns, central dome, formal porticos, and ornate stonework it is a hub of creativity and activism in the City.
 
© 2014 Wendy Bourke  

15 comments:

  1. Wow ... what atmosphere here ... I can hear the click of heels on the pavement and the quiet in between ... well done, Wendy!

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    1. That hour of the day - between dusk and dark - I find, often evokes such a moody atmosphere.

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  2. wandered into 1000 deja vus....that gives a shiver of a feel...really nice on the imagery in this as well...

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    1. The corner of Hornby and Robson is such a hive of people and ideas and art – amidst millions of footsteps – and the Gallery, itself, has stood there since its completion in 1906. It really wrote the words: “a thousand déjà vus for me”.

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  3. Actually, to clarify, the building, itself, began as the BC Provincial Court House - the first level of trial court in British Columbia for criminal, family and child protection cases. It was renovated in 1983 by architect Arthur Erickson and while maintaining aspects of turn of the century architecture – it is also very modern in design. It is very much a "people place" - a gathering spot for street vendors, musicians, protestors and artists – hence: “a thousand déjà vus”.

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  4. Very thought-provoking, Wendy! I'm trying to imagine what it would be like to wander into a thousand déjà vus!

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  5. Well, now that you mention it . . . . . . Smiles!

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  6. Wow Wendy, this is superb. I could feel the goose bumps!

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  7. As always, Jennifer (over how many years now?) - Thank you so much.

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  8. a great mysterious feel all through...specially the space and time in between dusk and dark, black cold onyx and the déjà vus around a 'people place'.....this is the
    delight of a poem...beautiful...

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    1. That time of the day does cast a mysterious feeling, doesn't it - I suppose that is why so many mystery plots are set at the hour become total darkness.

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  9. It feels like a walk that took you into parts of remembrance that maybe was not wished for but still maybe good. Love the mix of metaphors and reality..

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    1. Yes, the meanderings of one's mind pinned against a walk in a physical place.

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  10. I like how you take us from reality into thoughts and anxiety, Wendy! Great imagery in your poem. I particularly like 'the canyon walls of the city'.

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    1. Thanks for your lovely, insightful comments, Gabriella!

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