Sunday 14 June 2015

something left behind



I had walked, with my son,
along the pier to where we stopped

for it struck me odd:

the ashen gray deck post hacked 
with incised slices and slashes 
and scratches – the woebegone scars 
of dragon claw clashes – 
gouged in timber and left: it seemed 
so that ragged “y” and rakish “c” 
would moil on, well after death. 

not very enlightened thinking, I thought – 
stuff rots – as I cast my own wish
and, picking up a pebble from 
the wooden boards I stood upon . . . 
tossed it, as far as I could 
out into the sea – where – 
it plopped to the bottom of the briny depths.

we both smiled, then, as we strolled away 
knowing there was something left behind

because . . . I put it there.
  
“To live in hearts we leave behind is not to die.”
Scottish Poet, Thomas Campbell

note:  posted for Poets United.

photo:  Rocky Point Pier in Port Moody - W. Bourke

© 2015 Wendy Bourke

18 comments:

  1. I like the thought that there was something left behind because you put it there. It seems you made your mark, and I think this is something we all wish for ourselves, don't we? We all wish to leave something of ourselves...and hope that others will remember us ..... somehow.

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  2. I really enjoyed this poem..tossing the pebble is so symbolic and I hope your wish is heard and full-filled.

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  3. How beautiful, Wendy, something left behind because....."I put it there"......as we do with our poems, hopefully.

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  4. This is a very nice articulation of the thought... something peaceful about that acceptance.

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  5. Lovely, You took me with you every step of the way.

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  6. when we leave something behind let it be done with beauty...ha..dragon's claws seem to be spreading all over the world...

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  7. I feel that we always leave something to each place we went to..

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  8. Maybe it's the putting there that matters, and a pebble in the briny depth might feel the same as the carved letter left... Hmm this can be read over and over I think,

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  9. A beautiful poem which bodes so well with the quote you chose :D

    we both smiled, then, as we strolled away
    knowing there was something left behind

    These lines hold a timeless quality and shall not soon be forgotten..! Beautifully penned :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  10. Real messages are left behind in hearts and minds..not sand...beautiful imagery and wonderful message...

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  11. It is interesting, our desire to live beyond a moment. Marking our passing with names and initials - professions of love that lose significance over time. Each in our own way. Stuff does rot. Unless we feed it.

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  12. To be with our loved ones is the most blessed thing.

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  13. Our need to leave a mark, so well told. Great poem.

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  14. Love the choice of stone rather than carving, love the walk with the son and the shared smile. May your wish come true. Splendid poem!

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  15. Nice, I would do the same too... leave something behind ~ Thanks for sharing ~

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  16. I loved the hope in this--beautiful write!

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  17. I loved the hope in this--beautiful write!

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  18. I love the contrast between the ashen gray deck post and the pebble that you toss - both the visual contrast and the metaphorical contrast!

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