He flashed,
an undecided smile –
as he walked off: nonchalant
. . .
though, the man has, not a clue
– about the color – of the flowers . . .
of the flowers, that I want.
Think back, my dear,
(a long way back – back to that magic day)
(a long way back – back to that magic day)
and you may:
remember, yellow
ROSES – IN YOUR LOVELY BRIDE'S BOUQUET
ROSES – IN YOUR LOVELY BRIDE'S BOUQUET
AND
perhaps, you recall
perhaps, you recall
DAISIES – NODDING, IN YOUR BOUTONNIERE
AND
yellow swags like icing on
THE HILLTOP BELVEDERE.
AND THEN
the yellow
GINGHAM NURSERY –
GINGHAM NURSERY –
cast your mind back (way back when)
AND
the lemon yellow
CROCKERY
CROCKERY
that cheered our humdrum white kitchen.
TO SAY
nothing of
THE MARIGOLDS
nothing of
THE MARIGOLDS
I planted by the fence.
OR
the polka dotted
TABLECLOTH
the polka dotted
TABLECLOTH
beside
THE YELLOW BACKYARD BENCH.
THE YELLOW BACKYARD BENCH.
YELLOW
– A LOT OF YELLOW –
and frankly, I must say . . .
and frankly, I must say . . .
SURELY . . .
you did not forget,
you did not forget,
that
YELLOW NEGLIGEE ! ! !
BUT, HEY . . .
YELLOW NEGLIGEE ! ! !
BUT, HEY . . .
it’s just a color,
and so (REALLY) pardon me.
I realize it’s only been . . .
a mere
HALF CENTURY ! ! !
HALF CENTURY ! ! !
Almost fifty years of
YELLOW ! ! !
YELLOW ! ! !
(I know, a man has GOT TO think)
she'd probably like PINK ! ! !
paradox: a statement or proposition that, despite sound (or apparently sound) reasoning, leads to a conclusion that is senseless or unacceptable.
photos: Flower Shop in Yaletown and A Million Shades of Pink – W. Bourke
© 2014 Wendy Bourke
This is wonderful, Wendy!! Some people really take a long time to pick up clues, it seems? But then again....perhaps after many years, it IS a logical thing to believe that a change is in order. Smiles. Happy Valentine's Day.
ReplyDeleteWell, when it comes to little sentimental things (like color) I find men and women and often not on quite the same wavelength.
DeleteFantastically nostalgic AND humorous! THE MAN better get it RIGHT or his cheeks will be PINK! Happy Valentine's Day!
ReplyDeleteThis Valentine's Day, I decided to take the bull by the horns and read him the poem (subtle) - which he related to, with good humor (as in: Who knew???). So, we'll see what he walks through the door with.
DeleteAnd my Valentine Roses are [drum roll]. . . . . . PINK!
DeleteBut, of course.
Somehow, I just knew he couldn't resist going there. (He does like to keep life interesting.) But that's a poem for another day.
Anyway, they are lovely pink roses and - as long as he keeps bringing them (almost a half century in) - I'm happy and (for this Valentine's Day, anyway) IN-THE-PINK. Smiles
So he just turned to me and said: Have you figured out yet, why I went with pink? It was your title: Surprise Me. I even toyed with red, but I didn't have the heart.
DeleteAh-h-h-h-h . . .
Your poem made me laugh! My brother could be like that. He has a very hard time picking up the most obvious clues. Happy Valentine's Day!
ReplyDeleteI guess it's the old: men are from Mars, women are from Venus thing.
Deletelol...forgive us...the weaker sex...we dont have the same brain power
ReplyDeleteand rarely think...
though, i do rather like the color yellow
for its intensity
I suspect these little relationship blips are more likely to occur when someone is not thinking enough - and someone is thinking way-y-y-y too much. Smiles.
DeleteSo funny! I have to give your husband credit since he did pick up on the title! Maybe next year they will be yellow!
ReplyDeleteAh haha! Love all your hints. And glad you loved the lovely pink roses.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the day - it was a good day. And a bit of poetry fun! It seldom gets much better than that. Thanks, Robyn and Janet.
ReplyDeleteHahaha! So much for subtlety, maybe a direct request? lol This was so fun to read. Perfect!
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