where prayers
were the last best hope,
the lines became so blurred
it was hard to tell
the deserts from the seas . . .
the first warnings
of global warming:
a far off,
far-fetched distant memory –
and then, a miracle happened:
one by one humanity
stopped poisoning
the planet that they shared,
for slowly, it became terrifyingly clear –
all hope was lost
without a world
that could support . . .
life
“While
there’s life, there’s hope.” Marcus
Tullius Cicero, Roman Philosopher 106 BC–43 BC.
“Where there's hope, there's life.” Anne Frank, The Diary of a Young Girl,
1947.
note: the prompt
from Poetry Jam this week was “Deserts”
– physical deserts and metaphorical deserts.
photo: Sea Water –
W. Bourke
© 2014 Wendy Bourke
"where prayers
ReplyDeletewere the last best hope,"....love the lines..
A tragedy - a point of no return unless all are acting in concert! As it is the whole planet is choking slowly! Nicely Wendy!
ReplyDeleteluv this poem; AND its perfect for my Earth Day meme which is still open; you can link in HERE
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much love...
Such a timely piece, Wendy. Getting everyone to act together to solve this mess we've gotten ourselves into is so very monumental ... I do pray that we can address global warming before it IS too late ...
ReplyDeletePowerful poem & such an important message.
ReplyDeleteBut hope needs action, too...
ReplyDeleteI like the message here. The image of the similarity of sea and desert struck me. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteI really like that second stanza, and the title, of course!
ReplyDeleteIt lines become blurred, nicely written and a powerful message.
ReplyDelete"it was hard to tell the deserts from the seas" This stuck in my mind, how alike they are... maybe I'll go adjust my poem...
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing!
what a beautiful turn that would be...to actually make the changes we needed to sustain life on our planet and actually care about its well being...i can hope, that is for sure...smiles.
ReplyDeleteHope is not enough...you have to do something!
ReplyDeleteI really hope you are right in this poem. Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteA strong start and a strong ending (as always!). Enjoyable read with a good message.
ReplyDeleteYou have written a cautionary tale here, Wendy. Lots to think about.
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