when, at last, I came
to that circle of quietude
that hung like a blue orb
above the ancient tree tops,
my breathing labored,
in the shush of cedar boughs
and primordial peace . . .
I rested, then, in the fragrant forest:
the moments, so tender,
words of description stuck
like lumps in my throat . . . though,
after such a trek, I felt weightless,
as if all my burdens had
dissolved in the mist . . .
so lighthearted, that I soared
far from where my body stood –
swept away by Mother of the Wind . . .
and, in that transcendence,
it occurred to me:
this was the way
to come to the end of the trail.
notes: the prompt
from Poetry Jam this week is "Quiet".
The word "Squamish" means "Mother of the
Wind", as named by the Coast Salish inhabitants.
photo: Blue Orb (resting
spot on the Sea to Sky Hiking Trail, Squamish BC) – M.S. Bourke
©
2014 Wendy Bourke
You have described the journey of life in a very powerful manner, Wendy! I too hope that eventually I come 'to that circle of quietude'.
ReplyDeletehey i would not mind to find the end of that trail...well maybe not the metaphor...not yet at least...but when the time comes, i hope to be ready
ReplyDeleteto merge in nature.................a blissful thing to do
ReplyDeleteloved the circle of quietude - woodland and forest always give that feeling of peace
ReplyDeleteThere is so much layers in this peace.. and I really really liked the last line.. it worked to take the whole piece to a whole new dimension.
ReplyDeleteloved it, beautiful
ReplyDeleteQuiet Always
after such a trek, I felt weightless,
ReplyDeleteas if all my burdens had
dissolved in the mist . .
A lot of truth in this. One gets the benefits after some physical shedding off. So often it comes almost immediately. Wonderful write Wendy!
Hank.
Love this!
ReplyDeleteAh, I love the way you have described the weightlessness. Just perfect. Yes, this is the way to come to the end of the trail...and the quietness is palpable!
ReplyDeleteLovely for both a hike and a life. I so enjoyed reading your thoughts here.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is "the way to come to the end of the trail". Loved that close.
ReplyDeleteWendy,
ReplyDeleteI felt a recall of a forest setting in Northern Ireland, where we spent most weekends with our children, when they were young. A place where we all found that sense of peace. Mother of the wind,' passed through there as well...I found peace in reading your poem Wendy..
Eileen
I love that primordial forest and fragrance of trees and mother of wind ~ Lovely close as well ~
ReplyDeleteGood to read you again ~ As to your comment in my blog, I don't belong to any Canadian poetry club here ~ perhaps one day ~
Ahh..."the fragrant forest" "swept away by the Mother of the Wind"...sounds like a rapturous experience!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! Your first two stanzas captured me.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part:
ReplyDeleteI soared far from where my body stood
That is a good way to come to the end of the trail, not that I'm ready, mind you.
so lighthearted, that I soared
ReplyDeletefar from where my body stood –
swept away by Mother of the Wind . . .I LOVE THAT
…to soar like that toward heaven… sounds wonderful to me.
ReplyDeleteLife has so much to compare to nature & well knitted poem :)
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