Finally the rain-snow-sleet has stopped –
though, I remain in recovery, still,
from a particularly, virulent bout
of epically belligerent
West Coast January weather.
It began benignly enough, in irksome
stop-starts of blubbering sniffles
– sadly, a fairly chronic condition –
at this time of the year
but, by day three, it appeared
to be in the throes of some sort of
convulsive demonic possession
raining down upon the earth,
a blast of meteorological phenomena:
so multifarious
and alien in the sheer
conglomeration of forms, that precipitation,
can materialize in:
that
humankind has yet to coin the noun
befitting such a histrionic deluge.
But, at last, it has stopped –
leaving myself, and the rest of
the doused population of the land
to fill our lungs, jubilantly,
with gentle lachrymose air, infused with
the distinctive aroma of moldy cheese . . .
on a wet dog.
note: the prompt
at Poetry Jam this week is "Tis the Season".
photo: West Coast
January Weather – W. Bourke
© 2015 Wendy Bourke
There was some elegance to the blizzard that you've depicted until the ending where I nearly puked thinking about that smell.. yuck.
ReplyDeleteHa, I guess I would prefer winter snow over winter rain....It would really be difficult to deal with a few days of rain in succession. Hard to go OUT knowing one will be cold and drenched. Ah yes, and I can just picture all smelling like moldy cheese....on a wet dog. Eewwww!
ReplyDeleteI am not much of a fan of 'rain-snow-sleet'. It is cold and does not result in a pretty landscape. Your poem is powerfully evocative and makes me want to curl up in front of a warm fire.
ReplyDeletesmiles...i am glad that you survived...i know you are probably sick of the snow...but i really want some....this too shall pass...i like how you made the storm be like a virus/flu/nasty cold....stay warm....
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the years we lived in the Netherlands--rain, snow, sleet. I remember wishing it would just snow and stay snowy. The constant cold wet got really dreary. First I thought you were going to talk about having the nasty cold that seems to be going around even here in mild Southern California.
ReplyDeleteseens like the winter has been a bit ti long there nice poem
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful descriptions! You had me seeing, feeling and smelling (*gag!*) all of it. Our winter has been very mild, especially of late. I feel for you!
ReplyDeleteBTW the comment you left me on my Bumblebee poem cracked me up! That would definitely be a site I'd never forget! Haha!
That ending made me smile, that's horribly yucky ~ Winter is harder on us here and storm is upon us this week ~ Oh well, life goes on ~ And I hope you are feeling better ~
ReplyDeleteThat smell that I usually would say was the smell of wet sheep is repulsive, I think it's the same as a flu.. we have such weather right now..
ReplyDeleteAnd Wendy, just wanted to let you know that I will check on The Ontario Poetry Society. Best regards
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