I had walked, with my son,
along the pier to where we stopped
for it struck me – odd:
the ashen gray deck post hacked
with incised slices and slashes
and scratches – the woebegone scars
of dragon claw clashes –
gouged in timber and left: it seemed
so that ragged “y” and rakish “c”
would moil on, well after death.
not very enlightened thinking, I thought –
stuff rots – as I cast my own wish
and, picking up a pebble from
the wooden boards I stood upon . . .
tossed it, as far as I could
out into the sea – where –
it plopped to the bottom of the briny depths.
we both smiled, then, as we strolled away
knowing there was something left behind
because . . . I put it there.
“To live in hearts we leave behind is not to die.”
Scottish Poet, Thomas Campbell
note: posted for
Poets United.
photo: Rocky Point Pier in Port Moody - W. Bourke
© 2015 Wendy Bourke
photo: Rocky Point Pier in Port Moody - W. Bourke
© 2015 Wendy Bourke
I like the thought that there was something left behind because you put it there. It seems you made your mark, and I think this is something we all wish for ourselves, don't we? We all wish to leave something of ourselves...and hope that others will remember us ..... somehow.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this poem..tossing the pebble is so symbolic and I hope your wish is heard and full-filled.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful, Wendy, something left behind because....."I put it there"......as we do with our poems, hopefully.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nice articulation of the thought... something peaceful about that acceptance.
ReplyDeleteLovely, You took me with you every step of the way.
ReplyDeletewhen we leave something behind let it be done with beauty...ha..dragon's claws seem to be spreading all over the world...
ReplyDeleteI feel that we always leave something to each place we went to..
ReplyDeleteMaybe it's the putting there that matters, and a pebble in the briny depth might feel the same as the carved letter left... Hmm this can be read over and over I think,
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem which bodes so well with the quote you chose :D
ReplyDeletewe both smiled, then, as we strolled away
knowing there was something left behind
These lines hold a timeless quality and shall not soon be forgotten..! Beautifully penned :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Real messages are left behind in hearts and minds..not sand...beautiful imagery and wonderful message...
ReplyDeleteIt is interesting, our desire to live beyond a moment. Marking our passing with names and initials - professions of love that lose significance over time. Each in our own way. Stuff does rot. Unless we feed it.
ReplyDeleteTo be with our loved ones is the most blessed thing.
ReplyDeleteOur need to leave a mark, so well told. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteLove the choice of stone rather than carving, love the walk with the son and the shared smile. May your wish come true. Splendid poem!
ReplyDeleteNice, I would do the same too... leave something behind ~ Thanks for sharing ~
ReplyDeleteI loved the hope in this--beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteI loved the hope in this--beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteI love the contrast between the ashen gray deck post and the pebble that you toss - both the visual contrast and the metaphorical contrast!
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