had run amok
even the tussling breezes
had given up
and the stillness hung
in periwinkle blue
as it, inevitably, does
when I am feeling wistful
and listless
in beady droplets of feelings:
vague smatterings
that stubbornly
refuse to rain down
in torrents
and be done with it.
And then – it DID
begin to rain
splish-splashing me
in slapstick buckets.
The irony –
to say nothing of
the pathetic fallacy –
was not lost, in the downpour
and I laughed out loud
in cathartic chuckles.
note: Slapstick is a type of comedy based - not on words, but - on humorously embarrassing events.
note: Slapstick is a type of comedy based - not on words, but - on humorously embarrassing events.
photo: Port Moody
Pier – W. Bourke
© 2013 Wendy Bourke
© 2013 Wendy Bourke
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ReplyDelete"vague smatterings
that stubbornly
refuse to rain down
in torrents
and be done with it."
Exactly how it is! Absolutely loved your ending too.
As always, Jennifer. Thanks so much for your encouraging words of support - much appreciated.
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